tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post2497617763919834477..comments2022-11-12T09:38:16.104-05:00Comments on Random MicroFic & Poetry: New SceneRegCPA5963http://www.blogger.com/profile/02942519536643987787noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-76181235523825290092011-05-25T18:57:06.348-04:002011-05-25T18:57:06.348-04:00L, I believe I can post comments here now. It is ...L, I believe I can post comments here now. It is also on the F3 site.<br /><br />I really enjoyed your story. Great characters and terrific illustration of the prompt. You've done the dialogue well and created some characters that seem to be planted firmly on the dark side. Love this.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-21659571816897837472011-05-23T07:31:34.174-04:002011-05-23T07:31:34.174-04:00Great dialogue! You really created a feel of the c...Great dialogue! You really created a feel of the characters. (and I really love those hecklers up top...:-) )Ingrid KV Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357668181484669053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-6856523589252569082011-05-23T00:32:43.347-04:002011-05-23T00:32:43.347-04:00love your poetry/wriitng.
Greetings,
How is your...love your poetry/wriitng.<br /><br />Greetings,<br /><br />How is your day?<br /><br />Please share your poetry with JP potluck today,<br />Have fun!<br /><br />Love your talent, as always, appreciate your support.<br /><br />Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are all welcome!<br /><br />xoxox<br /><br /><br />click on my name to visit and find the collection.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-80581800249914053602011-05-22T11:54:08.897-04:002011-05-22T11:54:08.897-04:00Nicely negotiated! I particularly liked his exit ...Nicely negotiated! I particularly liked his exit at the end, it lends a very iconic stance to the character.Barbara Bruederlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14476249934930666695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-17936175119160948262011-05-20T21:24:18.257-04:002011-05-20T21:24:18.257-04:00@Veronica: Thank You
@Flannery Alden: Thanks for...@Veronica: Thank You<br /><br />@Flannery Alden: Thanks for the heads up on the duplicate word, just fixed itRegCPA5963https://www.blogger.com/profile/02942519536643987787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-2879116624391352342011-05-20T10:35:14.171-04:002011-05-20T10:35:14.171-04:00Great dialog and atmosphere. I really liked the la...Great dialog and atmosphere. I really liked the last paragraph. <br /><br />BTW: You've got a duplicate word (voice) up towards the top: "You country boys got some nerve", his voice voice not much above a whisper.Jenny Jenny Flanneryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07621715431584059448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-58953231709460334802011-05-20T00:30:24.679-04:002011-05-20T00:30:24.679-04:00Excellent dialogue! It really moved the story alo...Excellent dialogue! It really moved the story along nicely.<br /><br />I found myself not liking either one of the characters very much, and I mean this as a compliment to how well you crafted them.<br /><br />Very well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-90461353149209830922011-05-19T09:18:35.218-04:002011-05-19T09:18:35.218-04:00@Beach: thanks, glad you liked it can't wait t...@Beach: thanks, glad you liked it can't wait to read yours and everyone else's, negotiations are always unpredictable so many possibilities<br /><br />@Bluebell: thanks for stopping by, where can I find this short story slam, sounds intriguing.RegCPA5963https://www.blogger.com/profile/02942519536643987787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-67503199009316758842011-05-19T06:46:06.408-04:002011-05-19T06:46:06.408-04:00I am thrilled to land here,
what a perfect piece ...I am thrilled to land here,<br /><br />what a perfect piece of creation, you rock.<br /><br /><br />check out short story slam today. hope to see your participation.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2197645507094693380.post-91543759660035380912011-05-19T00:55:02.244-04:002011-05-19T00:55:02.244-04:00Very good, I liked the flow and the ease of the st...Very good, I liked the flow and the ease of the story. The dialog was excellent and I came away with a real vibe for the negotiation.<br /><br />This prompt was a real pain for me, wanted to stay as close to the word limit as possible but every idea quickly widened out into greater detail that went way past 1000 words.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.com